yow
flow was definitely crush on both sides, so well done fellas. having lyrics posted did boost my opinion for each, but HeIsAlive gets my vote based on overall delivery (enunciation points?). ill battle both cats
yow
flow was definitely crush on both sides, so well done fellas. having lyrics posted did boost my opinion for each, but HeIsAlive gets my vote based on overall delivery (enunciation points?). ill battle both cats
Thanks for the review Guzzi.
welllllll
lyrics-wise neither were bad (while reading em), but, MM was the spoken-word equivalent of illegible handwriting. also his cadence/timing/whatever (im not up on the proper terms) was off so boo-urns on that. Nimbus' flow was obv better hands-down, maybe if there was more punch-i-ness in Mao's verses it'd be closer but... nahh. sorry dude but the son of the clouds got this one on lock. the Miracle Whip/Hellman punch def got an out-loud chuckle from me also
HOLY SHIT.
sick. NASTY.
10/10
very impressive. i rarely if ever download hip-hop off NG that isn't instrumental -- but this is certainly worth downloading, listening-to again, and showing off to cats. good job man, this is a track to be proud of.
thanks a lot man. glad you like it
i dunno
real-life/interwebz drama, chick gaming, gun talk beef etc etc etc can be fun and all but yall should just meet up for a fist fight, beat the shit out of each other, then go to the bar and laugh about it over a couple beers. then just lay that shit to rest already.
mean rhymes though, lol
Yes steve. I dont even hate the kid. I have no intention of murdering him or ending his life. I just want to rawk his shit into the ground. Then help him back up and tell him "thank you for not being a scared pussy... lets go to wendies man"
- Mr. Big Bad Lejin (Hip Hop NG's#1 Artist)
- Real-Over-Fake -(Approved)
LOL
you killed him once, then he came back as a zombie and you killed him again.
fuck zombies in the ass man
LOL
sounds like a Chuck E. Cheese commercial or something... great annoying pitchman voice, funny stuff. on the "constructive criticism" tip I think you could benefit by putting a pop filter in front of your mic.
Yeah, I'm aware of the need for that. The problem is that my mic is one of those combination headset/microphones that you use for PC gaming so I'm not sure if there's a way to set up pop filter unless I hold the mic behind it while I'm speaking. Thanks for the review and tips on improvement.
Give Vik the credit
I can't really comment on my own involvement but does this dude Rucklo know how to produce and master a track or does this dude Rucklo KNOW HOW TO PRODUCE AND MASTER A TRACK!?
you KNOOOWW IT, homebooooiiii!!!
we sure gotta do this some time again ^___^
also, YO!
LOL
The lyrics were pretty decent, I especially liked how you ended it. As far as constructive criticism goes, I'd say maybe work on your pacing or something. Timing was off in parts. Otherwise, nice crack at it. :D
Coming from you, that means a lot! Thanks man. The ending was great lol.
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